In Jake’s blog post he talks about an interesting article that he found on sports nutrition using “technorati search”. Jake does a good job of first talking about the blog that he found using the search engine. He talks about the author and the author’s past, as long as explaining what the blog is about. He could of done a better job of going into a little more detail and talking about more specific topics in this blog that he found. Jake also describes how the blog is setup. He does a good job of this, telling us how the author uses pictures and hyperlinks effectively. This is a nice added detail Jakes talks about. Jake then talks about another blog that he found to be quite interesting. This blog is about health benefits from fish. He explains how the author writes this blog, which direct statements stating different ideas. However, he does not talk about any details on what the author is stating. Just that is about health benefits from fish.
Overall Jake’s blog was well written. It was interesting to see how he finds sports nutrition so interesting. The blog that he found had some very good and insightful posts on it. The author did a good job on the blog, as it was easy to ready and follow. Jake’s blog post was like that as well. It is easy to follow and well organized. The only suggestion I can make is a little more detail in the post. Would of given the reader a little more information. Overall though, Jake’s blog post was well done.
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