Thursday, December 16, 2010

Response to Megan’s Blog


            In Megan’s blog she talked about a “how to video” that she found online. The video that she chooses to write about was how to perform CPR. She starts off by stating how learning CPR is the very basic first step in becoming a medical student. So, right off the bat she states the relevance of the video. Megan then breaks down and analyzes the speech. She talks about the how video doesn’t really have an introduction or a conclusion, it just starts off right away by saying how to assess the patient. She says the video did a good job of explaining each individual step well and clearly, and that the “dummy” was a good visual aid and helped out with going over the steps.  Megan also talked about how the presenter’s voice made the speech boring to listen too. She said he had a very monotone voice and lacked any excitement, what so ever. The presenter also only went over each step once, when in a “how to speech” it is best to repeat the steps, so it sticks in the audience’s head more. Megan did state that the speech did do a good job of outlaying the proper steps of CPR.
            Overall, Megan did a very good job of analyzing and breaking down this, how to give CPR demonstration speech. She did a good job of breaking the speech down and commenting on the little things that make up a good “how to speech”. She did a very good job out outlying and stating the good and the bad points of the speech.  Explained what the presenter did well and what he needed to improve on. In general, Megan did a good job on breaking down this “how to teach CPR” speech. 

Technorati Blog Post


The blog that I found using Technorati search is called “Anabolic Steroids” and written by the author “isteriod”s. This blog is a blog about anabolic steroids and human growth hormone (HGH) in sports from today’s society. From MLB to NFL to MMA, it covers steroids in all sports and the world. Steroids in baseball and running have been the attention lately as they have been recent issues in the last twelve months. This blog has been up and running since December 2009, but as an extreme high number of posts as there is on average 2-3 blog posts a day. The author of this blog does a nice job of utilizing hyperlinks to better their blog. It adds a nice extra dynamic to the blog, ass it adds a useful website that goes into more detail about the certain blog post that the hyperlink is linked too.  The author also adds a lot of pictures to the blog posts; most of these pictures is a certain athlete about the sport that the blog post is talking about. The odd time the author will add a video to its blog posts, which are usually some sort of interview about a specific aspect of the blog post.
            The blog post that I found that relates to my informative paper is from the same blog I talked about in the above paragraph. The name of the blog post is, “Olympian Eddy Hellebuyck Admits Doping “.  This blog talks about a Olympian runner who admitted to using anabolic steroids to enhance his performance. The reason for him using the steroid was to better his recovery (which I outlined in my informative paper). The tone and style of this blog is written in a very informal style, while my informative paper was more formal. The informative paper was more of a academic tone, while the blog was written for all ages to read and more in a amateur tone.